Score: 10

"A collab that's actually funny!"

submission: Sonic Shorts: Volume 1

date: May 18, 2008

Wow, usually you see collabs that show off serious skills, but the actual content is lackluster. This collab, however, was actually funny from start to finish, not a weak spot in the whole thing. The animation quality was top notch also, what I'd expect from a collab of love.

Overall, some of the best newgrounds has to offer. I can't give any negative criticism on it. Fantastic job guys.

Score: 4

"Definitely a newbie movie"

submission: Starfox Randomness

date: April 2, 2008

Hey, good to see you had the courage to post something on newgrounds. This site can be really intimidating for newer people, but I can say that this is a good beginner's effort.

The lack of experience and Flash know how is definitely apparent, but the more technical things like smooth backgrounds and less jilted animation are going to get better the more you work with it. The important thing is that you have the basic skill.

The character drawings are actually not too bad and you didn't swear a million freaking times throughout the movie, a nice change of pace from most of the new guys at newgrounds. I'm confident you'll get a lot better really quickly and you're one of the new guys that really should take that extra step and learn some more flash. You have some talent that has yet to be realized.

When it comes to the comedy, well, that's in the eye of the beholder. I'd probably get a couple of friends to watch it first before proclaiming that it's funny. When you say that it's funny, it better be damn funny or people will tear you apart for saying that.

I also wanted to make a quick comment about the Arwing scene. instead of just throwing pictures up there like Robotnik and Hillary, try doing some basic editing and cut characters out of the white background stuff, it looks so unprofessional the way it is. Also, the joke may have been funnier if you had made a Hillary/Andross hybrid instead of just stretching out a pic of hillary on the screen.

This is definitely far from the worst I've seen when it comes to newbies and I feel you'll get a lot better really quickly if you take the time to learn more about Flash. There's a basic talent there and I hope to see more stuff from you in the future.

Score: 9

"Very impressive!"

submission: NiN10Doh!

date: April 2, 2008

This is why collabs are so fun to watch. It's like sampling the talent of Newgrounds in one handy Flash package. I've got to say that the jokes are pretty hit and miss, though that's expected with a collab. The funniest thing I saw was the megaman joke from clicking on the right Wii chicks breasts.

What really made this amazing was the incredible animation quality. The jokes may not have been the best, but the incredible quality of the animation really shows you poured your hearts and souls into this collab. It's really hard to find this level of quality stay consistent through an entire video on Newgrounds. Fantastic work.

This was a really visually impressive movie and was one of the most technically sound pieces on Newgrounds. This would have been probably THE best flash on Newgrounds with better jokes. Keep up the amazing work everyone!